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Its always the fate of the galaxy.

What doex grim determination look like?

mmmmm jumps in too quick......set the scene before the meat of the story rolls in.....or as they say SET THE DAM TABLE BEFORE YOU EAT BOY!!!.....

Aliens aren’t going to go to “talking doctors”. These stories are getting real close to Disney woke bs. Please just make fun stories.

I liked the story and wish for more. Being a vet

The firmament, first book of genesis, holy Bible...God spent all day Tuesday it.....

😅if it weren't for the firmament or dome, our atmosphere would float off into space.......

Tesla said there's no such thing as gravity or electrons........electromagnetism.........

Go out in your yard and cover a ball with water, spin the ball really really fast...tell me what happens to all of the water...not some of the water,, all of the water...physics.........

Is there a sequence of books I am confused about which one to start with first

Starts out fine and then the AI flips out into techno babble gibberish.

2 hours long no people listen for like 20 mins max

I LIKE THE STORY

Yes I like this story 😊

Seems like a cheap ploy just for views

I don't understand what was the point of this story. Or why for ten minutes you had to tell how it made you uncomfortable. It would of been easier to not upload at all

Very nice story ♥️♥️😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

I dig these stories 👍🎯🥰

I keep seeing things that I could draw from the story of the US rebuilding after WW2,were did our American spirit take a wrong turn 😢

One minute Ector is in Moscow fighting in his mech. The next he is on the Relentless trying to fight off the fighters. Then Ector escapes the Relentless and is back in Moscow. Doesn't anyone edit these stories?

There's multiple sections where it seems entire parapgraphs are missing. Sad days.

i liked the story, keep-em up i enjoy the longer ones as the characters have more depth.

Hello HYF. IS THERE A READING ORDER?

Why would i want to listen to an AI voice for more than 1,5 hours if I can just read it myself ?

Why do you keep saying the same thing iver and over again.

Its always the end of the galtic counsel. Sounds like the empire in star wars. Except the star wars empire were tough , grand admiral thrawn kicked booty..The halactic council sounds like a group of weak aliens.

A nice story, I would've preferred a bit more details on how the people became the same as monsters they hunted. It could also benefit from more clear time scale.

Like the story love the Narrator's voice

It's a good story, wish people would stop crapping on your stories, keep it up love the stories

is there a book series that this is a part of?

I sit here with my fingers flying over the keyboard. The crumbling mass of my house ,twisting and writhing around me. I make it to my car just in the nick of time and blast myself and family out of the driveway , and into the safety of the street just as my house vanishes in a blinding flash of pure energy. Out of the gloom of night a garbage truck suddenly appears with a stench that almost overpowers me, but I twist the wheel avoiding it at the last second.To safety, for now, but I know the road ahead will be long and hard,if I can avoid the street sweepers. lol

Awesome story

good

The story is expiring remind that we should never bought a material I love it is there another chapter I gotta know how old they pull through please don't tell me this is like the Alamo ortho Popely where is the last stand

was a good story

Read your history about slavery.

The only thing I hate about these stories is that the picture usually don't match up to the character descriptions given in the stories. Proper visualization is very important as you follow the story with your mind.

Definitely liked the story!

Constant repeats of the same concept. Makes me think of a kid writing an essay for school that must have a set number of words so said student just kept repeating the same thing with some shuttle differences and I loosely use the word some. I couldn't take it anymore I had to fast forward to the end...

9 mins in and I’m hit with ad 3&4.

i liked the video

Wait, first they were on some unknown planet gathering their supplies, then suddenly they're landing on earth??? What happened in between????

These pathetic DEI authors couldn't write a logically consistent story to save their lives. Maybe their teachers should introduce them to the concept of a story outline.

Ozone and burnt flesh , only way you can say that

Loved it!

The underlying writing skill is okay but the pacing and detail are way off. Colonizing an unknown planet gets something like three sentences. Plus there's a bunch of other weird stuff. Instantly finding a habitable planet with no explanation of how they travelled the vast distance to get there. The Andromedans can't find them there immediately but some other race of randoms does, and nobody says "how did you find us?" which for security reasons seems like a pretty important question. There's other stuff but it doesn't matter. The author has ability but needs to work on pacing and detail.

I remember the good old times before I got curious and clicked on this.

E the storie

It's aways fun to read/listen about how filthy xenos are shocked about human living in what is for them the most inhospitable place in the universe

I can't skip the ads! When the ad finishes I can't continue the video! So I can't hear your story!